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Jo Watson's avatar

Thanks for opening this up, Cali. There's a lot of food for thought here. Great comments and ideas with pointers to move forward. With love, xxx

Frank Dent's avatar

It might be easier to say what’s bad writing than what’s good. And AI in its current state supplies good examples of bad writing.

For example, take a look at this AI-generated piece on the “meaning” of a song:

https://www.songtell.com/neil-young/old-man

And this is not a particularly difficult song, I don’t think. And really, has the AI even gotten at the song’s “meaning,” or has it just paraphrased what’s there in the lyrics and maybe pulled in a phrase or two from Wikipedia? And note how there’s no mention of the song’s music, the singer’s voice, how it changes in intensity as it suddenly shifts up in pitch. Surely the music and sound of a song is important to its “meaning.”

So these are some of the telltale signs of AI writing and maybe things to look for and excise from our own writing: (1) It’s Captain Obvious stuff. (2) Sometimes it reads like it’s by someone for whom English is not their first language. (3) It’s cold and emotionless. (4) There’s absolutely nothing personal in it. (5) It proceeds in a linear fashion from beginning to end. (6) It may often be factually incorrect. (7) It tells you everything and nothing.

Here’s the song, in case you now want to listen to it:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=An2a1_Do_fc

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